Journal two

Before reading this particular article I had always revised an essay by working on grammar rather than the actual content. I had never really tried to fix someones paper by telling them how to improve on it and make it better. Now after reading this section I understand what proof reading is all about and has changed my attitude towards peer editing. At my first workshop I will be honest and criticized when needed before I would never even think about telling someone who asked for help, that their paper sucks.